Perfection?

James Michael

An infant

Heart and soul so pure

New to this world 

Perfect in God’s eyes 

Growing year after year 

Seeing and feeling 

what is right and wrong 

Knowing the difference 

Choosing one or the other

Knowledge given 

A fruit forbidden 

An offer of choice

for the devil’s delight 

A child perfect 

A life of choices 

Losing perfection 

 

 

  • Author: James Michael (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 19th, 2026 21:14
  • Category: Spiritual
  • Views: 7
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  • sorenbarrett

    A poem of a cost of time and milage where any car that runs on the road is bound to show some wear and tear. Nicely done

    • James Michael

      I’m seeing artificial intelligence to be an infant with a very bleak future.

      • sorenbarrett

        SIDs

      • orchidee

        Good write JM. Of course, only you and I are prefect. We're two GPD's. lol.

        • James Michael

          Guinea Pig Dudes. Godly Praying Dudes also!

          Thanks for the realistic comment. Too much artificiality going about. Spell check took care of that fancy word!

          • orchidee

            I can't shay arti-fishi-alitysh after a couple of gins! lol.



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