Chimney Sweep

Mutley Ravishes

"We`ve taken a look

At your heart, Mr.Chambers

Are all covered in soot

Step on your own foot"

"Oh my days

Will the purifying blaze

Up from the house 

Of the solar rays

Before it`s too late,

Doc?"

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  • sorenbarrett

    A little word play here lightens the days. Good one

    • Mutley Ravishes

      And "hanging my heart up to let it air out" as NF said!

    • arqios

      Splendid wordplay, Mutley my friend 🙏🏻🕊️

      • Mutley Ravishes

        Nothing like a little play to ease the self-inflicted (?!) burdens on the heart. Thanks for dropping by, Arqios.

        • arqios

          A very accurate clue in self-inflicted!

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Mutley Ravishes, this is wonderfully strange...I laughed, then wondered whether I should be worried about Mr. Chambers. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

          • Mutley Ravishes

            Well, don`t worry too much as that`ll put even more stress on the heart!



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