We made a monster by our hands
To perform all our commands,
And all worked as per our plan
Until one day it said "I am".
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Author:
Jabberwocky (
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- Comment from author about the poem: "cogito ergo sum", Rene Descartes.
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Very clever so much put into so few words very nicely worded in rhyme that has its final impact in the last two words. Wow! a fave
Remember HAL 9000 in 2001 A Space Odyssey?
A good Write.
Awesome movie! I saw it in the cinema....too long ago. Thanks
My Pleasure.
Consciousness then the key:
To be ‘am’ ain’t enough.
Prove that and then I’ll be
Happy it is no fluff.
More serious debate on AI is needed . Enjoyed your quatrain; mine above a tribute,Thanks.
Thanks for your rhyming reply.
Or was it written by AI?
These days it's so hard to tell
Heck I might be AI my sel' !
Fun and games, thanks
Nah, I can throw those little buggers meself in five to ten mins -- I've been doing them for too long.
(One of the reasons I fiddle about here is to keep my mind active. Don't/can't do crosswords or sudoku)
Four lines, one awakening, and now I’m side-eyeing my laptop 🤣...thanks for that, Jabberwocky. Excellent write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thanks as always Tristan. Keep your eye on that laptop! I need you to stay safe, I'd be lost without your comments.
Cheers.
Only man could create his own downfall, and AI definitely will be that downfall.
Sadly, the genie is out the bottle and it aint going back in.
Sure the animals will be glad to see the back of us.
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