A.I.

Jabberwocky

We made a monster by our hands

To perform all our commands,

And all worked as per our plan

Until one day it said "I am".

  • Author: Jabberwocky (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 23rd, 2026 03:45
  • Comment from author about the poem: "cogito ergo sum", Rene Descartes.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 19
  • Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    Very clever so much put into so few words very nicely worded in rhyme that has its final impact in the last two words. Wow! a fave

  • Kevin Hulme

    Remember HAL 9000 in 2001 A Space Odyssey?
    A good Write.

    • Jabberwocky

      Awesome movie! I saw it in the cinema....too long ago. Thanks

      • Kevin Hulme

        My Pleasure.

      • Doggerel Dave

        Consciousness then the key:
        To be ‘am’ ain’t enough.
        Prove that and then I’ll be
        Happy it is no fluff.


        More serious debate on AI is needed . Enjoyed your quatrain; mine above a tribute,Thanks.

        • Jabberwocky

          Thanks for your rhyming reply.
          Or was it written by AI?
          These days it's so hard to tell
          Heck I might be AI my sel' !

          Fun and games, thanks

          • Doggerel Dave

            Nah, I can throw those little buggers meself in five to ten mins -- I've been doing them for too long.

            (One of the reasons I fiddle about here is to keep my mind active. Don't/can't do crosswords or sudoku)

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Four lines, one awakening, and now I’m side-eyeing my laptop 🤣...thanks for that, Jabberwocky. Excellent write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

            • Jabberwocky

              Thanks as always Tristan. Keep your eye on that laptop! I need you to stay safe, I'd be lost without your comments.
              Cheers.



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