NONE TO BLAME

nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

Did I tell you ?
Autumns rainbow
Formed an archway
For my soul
Or the love
I felt for you
As a river
Steady flowed.

Did I tell you ?
Of the snowflake
That fell
From Winters sky
Melted in its tears
As our love
It slowly died.

Did I tell you ?
Of the sorrow
That rode lightning
In its flame
Or the loneliness
That followed
In quiet stillness
None to blame.

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  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Powerful, Norman...there’s no accusation here, just the ache of something beautiful reaching its end. This landed hard. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

  • sorenbarrett

    Love's journey comes to an end as told by this poem. There is sadness here and I can feel the cold coming on. Nicely written my friend.

  • orchidee

    Good write N. Surely someone to blame for that bus not turning up?! lol.

  • arqios

    Most moving, friend. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

    • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

      very kind, thanking you and much appreciation

      • arqios

        Very welcome, Norman πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ



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