The dying sun stares
Its burning eye will not close
It knows I am here
The daylight starts to scream
Black veins crawl across the sky
Something wakes below
I whisper my last wish
The sun goes dark for a moment
Then whispers it back
Night swallows the world
But the sun still burns somewhere
Behind my closed eyes
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Author:
Ethan Mikel St.Amour (
Offline) - Published: September 25th, 2026 07:27
- Category: Haiku
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Comments2
It is the last stanza that gets the fave in this poem. Both poetic and metaphoric it sends a powerful message. Nicely done
It never stops shining. Not even for a second! Great write.
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