If the identity
Is caught up in
Limitations
How on earth can
The gravitational force field
Of a grindstone
Be subject to
Evasions?
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
Offline) - Published: September 26th, 2026 00:24
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It is the complexity of verbal definition combined with physics added to rhyme that has tied my mind in a knot and left a fave behind. Well done
"My own" mind got tied in a knot with this one, Soren! I can't claim "ownership" of it, at all.
You are most welcome and none of us can claim ownership of all we write it comes from somewhere some closer and some farther away
We try, we cry, we fry or fly, then we die... 😃👍🏻
Haha!😂
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