Birth, Sickness, Old-Aged, Dead

Mutley Ravishes

If the identity

Is caught up in 

Limitations

How on earth can

The gravitational force field 

Of a grindstone

Be subject to

Evasions?

  • Author: Mutley Ravishes (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 26th, 2026 00:24
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 14
  • Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett
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  • sorenbarrett

    It is the complexity of verbal definition combined with physics added to rhyme that has tied my mind in a knot and left a fave behind. Well done

    • Mutley Ravishes

      "My own" mind got tied in a knot with this one, Soren! I can't claim "ownership" of it, at all.

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome and none of us can claim ownership of all we write it comes from somewhere some closer and some farther away

      • arqios

        We try, we cry, we fry or fly, then we die... 😃👍🏻



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