Misty mountain pass
no one said the bridge was out
watch me as I fall.
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Author:
Fränz Müller (
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Comments3
A rather dark senryu that has metaphoric meaning as well. Nicely crafted
Thanks!
You are very welcome
Fränz, I did not expect the floor to disappear that quickly. 😂 Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you!
Oh wow, I've never read a haiku that 1) was entirely fictional and 2) told a story in so small a space
Well done!
Thank you!!
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