FINGERTIPS

nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

Mere fingertips
Upon the edge of time
That judged a man
But not his rhyme
Strings on bows
To arrowhead
Searched his cupboards
As he lay dead.

Built a fire
In the hearth
Of a cold metal grate
At days start
While on a wooden bed
Comfort free
Lost to Heaven
Finally free.

Genius lay
In mortal flesh
Bone and sinew
Now at rest
Eyes that stared
To ceiling stained
A garret coffin
Words now framed.

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  • orchidee

    Good write N. We're holding on to hope with our fingertips, that a bus may come along. lol.

  • sorenbarrett

    Norman this one grabbed me it combines vivid real images with symbolism to create a poetic enigma and painting of a surreal scene. Modernistic it uses classical images. Well done a fave my friend

  • Thomas W Case

    Fantastic work.

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Norman, that “garret coffin” image stopped me cold. Bleak as hell, and I could see the whole room. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

    • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

      thank you my friend, it would seem mission accomplished in this poem, much appreciated



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