The Incomplete State

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There are things inside me that are alive

With a mind of its own

My hands moved up to choke my throat

Before the woman that’s my crone

I was crowned a king

But I’m living like a peasant

My tears soaked my face when I cried alone

Those explosions aren’t pleasant

I can shed a bit of that head

Hanging upside down in the tree

While I dream of a comforting girl

Echoed from another world

The unfavorable circumstance:

My sister never cared much about me

I feel wasted and degraded

I’ll shrink myself to fit 

Before I slide down the Sycamore tree

Railing and trailing in bits

I’ll keep making rhymes throughout this time

One’s a lonely number despite the three

And I’ll never let go

Mark my words on your phone

Of what matters to me

  • Author: Lewis O’Carroll (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 29th, 2026 11:55
  • Category: Surrealist
  • Views: 6
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  • sorenbarrett

    This poem in its surreal nature and absurdity of circumstances breaths a childes voice and seems to speak from another world. Well done



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