I see you
Burning brightly
Thin and tall
Red-hot and nimble
Dancing in the wind
Speaking in tongues
Swift lips
Strong gaze
A golden hour
I see with you
Illuminating us
Lighting our path
Creating shadows
Bending light
Flickering reflections
Signaling to all
Comfort is here
I feel you
Warming my hands
Lifting the air
Melting the wax
Shooing the insects
Livening the party
Creating a home
I know you
Have this flame inside you
Are loving to share
Feeling into all
Knowing yourself
Knowing me
Knowing how much
I love you
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Author:
Marshall (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 30th, 2026 23:39
- Category: Love
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Comments1
Creative and nicely executed this poem takes the flame from a fire and expands on it as a sign and emblem of love itself. Both being energy, warmth there are so many metaphorical similarities. It works well. Nicely done
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