Timeless ambiguity

Lorenz

Prisoner of a forgotten time 

in which every fragments 

is a different reality .

Chained within a clock  

who has never smiled ,

each tick tock  evoking

a possible future ...

  I watch my visage in the 

looking- glass of unborn hours ,

traveler of the uncreated ,

ever refashioning my mirages...

 Time,you are a fleeting lie 

woven from the loom of nothingness...

At every heart beat ,hands dissolve 

the ink of errors and illusions ,

for the price paid in faded memories,

sold on the black market of paradoxes...

My tale is but a whisper etched 

in the great ledger of departed echoes .

 Conceived from the imperfect dance ,

information you will return .

 Cog in the intelligent geometry .

Is this nothing more than a mechanical theater

where golden puppets act out their destinies

in the shimmering mist of a feverish dream .

illuminated by dying stars ?

 The drama is cast . 

  spectral drifter chasing the phosphorescent

glow of my own silhouette through a fog 

steeped in a scent of dementia...

 Before disapearing from your accusing stare . 

  Timeless ambiguity ...

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Lorenz, the “golden puppets” image got me. Are we actually creating what comes next, or just performing something already cast while convincing ourselves we’re improvising? That question hangs beautifully over the ending. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️

    • Lorenz

      This question is philosophically interesting ...It touches of an existential dramatic art .

    • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

      This piece asks many questions

    • sorenbarrett

      Ambiguity is great you don't have to make a choice and if you do you can't be blamed. Better yet if in a dream where you can step away when you awake.

      • Lorenz

        I stand by my choice of poetic ambiguity !

        • sorenbarrett

          And so you should all poems are by nature ambiguous

        • Ellen Marsell

          Between the memory of what is gone and the expectation of what is yet to come, trying to understand whether we are really free to shape our lives, or whether we are just a part of some vast, unfathomable mechanism of time.

          • Lorenz

            The answer lies somewhere in an ambiguous dimension...



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