A bold confusion

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I have a bold confusion 

Could be I am right

Subtle trepidation 

With God I cannot fight 

 

With all the proselytization 

It might give some relief 

To think your situation 

May not be up the creek 

 

I am at the conclusion 

Not caring who you are 

My focus, like an illusion 

Is on the bright and morning star 

 

Eternity for all those 

Written on their heart 

One God, one race, all nations 

The thief to depart. 

  • Author: Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 6th, 2026 09:51
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 22
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    Nicely written this one asks whose side you are on and confuses with a few images. Well done

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Valiantstar, I like the openness here. Faith doesnโ€™t always hand us tidy answers, but it can certainly change how we look at one another. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

  • orchidee

    Good write 2. Yes - prosely-wotsit! lol. I can't say it after a gin or two. lol. Proshy-lie-iesh-sation is it?



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