One dreams to come home.
The evening moon sails across the sky.
One's dreams stream along,
to the peaceful sailing of the moon.
By dawn, the moon has sailed away,
En route to discovery.
One awakes to play within the wonder.
One's dreams came home.
One dreams to come home.
The evening moon sails across the sky.
One's dreams stream along,
to the peaceful sailing of the moon.
By dawn, the moon has sailed away,
En route to discovery.
One awakes to play within the wonder.
One's dreams came home.
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Dreams fill this poem. Very nicely expressed
Thank you for your kindful words. The moon's phases and voyages inspire dreams, play and wonder.
You are most welcome Jamiano and indeed they do.
Since, you first commented on the poem, I have revised it. This is my daily routine. Awake in the night. Post a poem. Revise the poem upon awakening in the morn. Maybe, I shouldn not post till noon. Ha ! Ha !
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