Your words
pierce my heart
like a bullet, the hot lead
simultaneously searing my flesh
and opening a portal
that, in a moment
drains my life away.
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Author:
Fränz Müller (
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Comments3
A metaphor used well in this poem. Nicely done
Thank you!
Most welcome
Fuck, Fränz...this brought someone straight to mind. I’d rather not remember their exact words, but apparently I still do. Powerful write, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Aw, thank you! 🥹
Relatable , words can indeed pierce and stab the heart. Awesome deep cut poem! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
Thank you so much! And I shall! ☺️
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