I spiralled downward upward to breathe the pain,
steadied myself and down and up I spiralled again.
I held my chest and feared my heart.
Wincing and fists from the start.
It took a moment and my rhythm stopped.
Upward downward I fainted dropped.
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Maplespal (Pseudonym) (
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nicely done
Like the rhythm of the poem it stopped abruptly. A good write and hope it is not true. Well written with good rhyme for the meter
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