The theme

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Would be nice members 

To clarify the scene 

If I could remember 

Where I have been. 

 

Not with Google or Ghost or sleazy skin..

 

But maybe that's where this story begins 

 

Or ends 

 

Visions allude me

 

Putting it crudely 

 

If I am not out of luck 

 

There might be something to pluck 

If I remember the theme 

 

It was only a dream 

 

Not of Ghouls or Goblins or wicked hosts 

 

Or blood-lust in the veins 

 

Subtle in their nature 

 

Can a dream turn to shame 

 

Lift up or bring down 

 

Satisfying a longing 

 

Could be overdue 

 

Recite a sonnet 

 

One that speaks of you 

 

Miracles unfurling with a burnt staff 

 

Temptation dawning 

 

I wake and think of you 

 

If dreams are the themes 

 

You still pull me through. 

  • Author: Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 10th, 2026 10:55
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 17
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    Visions in dreams as they used to come to many in this poem nicely written.

  • orchidee

    Good write 2.

  • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

    A superb poem rhyming fab and flowing smoothly. Metaphoric a bit. Kudos!!

    Plz also read and comment my newest poem too

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    I’m still wondering about that burnt staff, Valiantstar…I’d gladly hear more if you ever return to it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

    • 2781

      Mt too! It was after all, it was only a dream...



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