Cows milked: mitigated mooing in the meadows.
Weaving on the warp, some workaholic women.
Harvest of hapless halibuts on hooks.
Bookish book-worms buried in books.
A palomino and a pony patter on the paving.
Hucksters and hawkers stalking every housing.
Ravers out on the razzle raising a raucous razz-ma-tazz.
Beavers busy building beaver-dams but about it quite blasé.
Doves cooing in divine chorus.
Frogs frisking out of focus.
Horoscopes are hocus pocus.
Tidal waves of tsunami treacherously tread.
Sea-anemones scattered upon the sea-bed.
Geraniums genuflecting in jungle-like gardens.
Hunters wary of wandering wild-life wardens.
All this when I ventured about videotaping.
Nature's much nicer even with no landscaping.
These are direly different scenes from various parts of the globe.
Perhaps like a space probe's kaleidoscopic poetic probe...
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Author:
S.zaynab.M.V.Kamoonpury (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Nature
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nicely written
Warmest thanks for feedback,
It sounds like Alice's garden in wonderland in a surreal world and indeed that is where we live. Nicely written with great images and a fun trip indeed.
Oh yeah i like different perspectives. Its real life scenes from different corners. Thanks soo much for comment,
You are most welcome
Love the use of alliteration and imagery as a poetic kaleidoscope😊
Warm thanks for great feedback,
I really enjoyed reading your poem, my friend. I smiled at the playful sounds, the clever word combinations, and the vivid, unexpected images. You have a lovely way of making words dance and bringing ordinary scenes to life in such an imaginative way. I especially enjoyed the sheer delight you take in language. Thank you for sharing this little gem with us!
Yayy thanks soo much for that super cool review, im thrilled you found out my actual reason for writing poetry, for literary entertainment. Cheers,
You bet!
Reading your profile, I see you are speaking from experience.
Um well yeah i experience such nature when i get to wander the country.
Thanks for comment, different.
Hello, Zay,
A cacophony of sounds and a kaleidoscope of colours in your own unique style. Lovely to read your poetry again. Excellent!
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
Hiii poet Tony, always nice to see you around as we met on other poetry sites too. Bring Pauline and the others here too. It would be nice to reconnect.
Thanks soo much for your super comment,
What a wonderful poem! Nicely done.
Thanks soo much for great feedback , cheers,
Those beavers cracked me up, Zaynab. I'd be demanding a nap and some recognition after that much work! Well written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Glad you'd fun with my poem, its for laughs and literary enjoyment so yeah.. Thanks muchly for your review,
Enjoyed. Meadows reminds me of the Summer that - Alas - has now gone.
Then you should come over here where summer never ends, while us keep wishing for oooh exotic winter wonderlands of snow. Thanks for lovely comment,
My Pleasure.
So very well put
Thanks soo much for feedback,
most welcome, enjoyed
One poem and you have covered such a vast territory 👌✌️wow
Warmest thanks for great feedback,
Always welcome 🤗
Hi there,
I really enjoyed the clever wordplay in this, particularly the alliteration. I liked the bookworms buried in books and the horoscopes being hocus pocus. A very enjoyable read.
- Syd 🍄
Thanks soo much for great feedback,
:3
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