Dim Sum

Mutley Ravishes

"Thanks heavens

I`ve overcome

The instinct

Of the muscle operating system

To resort to tensions

When faced with a threat

Or the fear of death" said 

The Monkey King to himself

He`d been flowing along

An arm of the Milky Way

When one day, he met

A dim sum, no wait a second....

He`s far out of the Middle Kingdom

A dim sun with a six pack

It lacked

Power

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  • sorenbarrett

    Here misunderstanding can take over for dim sum a Chinese small dish does not always satisfy and a six pack of such delights does little to fill the stomach. Not the intention of the meaning still it fits.

    • Mutley Ravishes

      For sure, that`s another way of seeing it I was aiming at "conduits!" Thanks for dropping by, Soren.

      • sorenbarrett

        I knew very well that was not the initial intent but could not help but throw this in. It is a pleasure my friend

      • arqios

        Most thoroughly enjoyed dear friend ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Mutley, I have questions about this celestial workout programmeโ€ฆdoes eating count? Asking after reading your title. LOL! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

        • Mutley Ravishes

          Dim Sum could never be made without the backing of a brilliant sun!



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