The paper boat

Dog days

 

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  • Author: Bells (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 12th, 2026 23:31
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  • Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett
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  • Dog days

    A paper boat
    That the ocean sank

    Anyway-
    Who is keeping scores of that

  • sorenbarrett

    There is such deep meaning in so few words. To start with a paper boat on a sea such a comparison as vast as the sea yet as insignificant as a paper boat. Power and weakness, eternal and so short lived, vast and finite, water and wood, womb of life and birth now reincarnate man's creation. Beware such simple and to the eye plane writes for they contain deep wisdom it is upon simplicity that complexity emerges. From simple atoms diamonds are made. A fave

    • Dog days

      Thank you Mr. Sorren for your kind words

      • sorenbarrett

        My pleasure



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