A Long Time Dead

Tony Grannell

A farmer once worked hard a plot and a poor one at that.
Held his own in worn-out boots and a felt fedora hat.
Stood six-foot more of might and strength, dared none made threat his stead.
A hardy sort, as I recall, though he a long time dead.

He'd fatten pigs and thin the beet, a haggled fair and square.
Yoke a pair of chestnut mares, knowing spring was in the air.
He of his lot where toiled alone, he loved but never wed.
A lonely sort, as I recall, though he a long time dead.

And gifted he in many things, a ploughman, smith, a poet.
He'd shod a horse whilst quoting, Yeats and others, too, of note.
Done his day, queer stuff he'd read, strange ramblings in his head.
A clever sort, as I recall, though he a long time dead.

In dark a mood and whiskey tears, he'd damn his lonesome life.
He pining for his Rosaleen, "She should a been me wife!"
He dare not ask her for her hand for he in shyness bred.
If once but dared and said she, aye. Would he, a long time dead?

A farmer was, he of a time, he toiled where there but one.
He lived out yon, beyond the edge where few before had gone.
"If love be life," he'd oft' times say, "then truth in what I've read.
A man who shies from lovin’ is a man a long time dead."

Delirious when nigh the end, he a-beckoned her, "Come here!
Oh Rosaleen, me darlin’ girl, come hither to me dear."
And she, in dreams, approaching him, a tenderly, she tread.
A gentle sort, as I recall, though she a long time dead.

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  • arqios

    A most thoroughly enjoyed read, Tony ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

    • Tony Grannell

      Hello, arqios,

      That you enjoyed this one, gladdens me and as now and always thank you ever so much.

      Fond regards,

      Tony.

      • arqios

        As ever my friend, ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

      • sorenbarrett

        The character development in this poem was marvelous Tony. The repeated phrase as the last line in each stanza gives it such a folk like feel and adds power to the meaning. I had to read it more than one time to get the full meaning (being a little slow). It carries such a haunted feel that memories persiste long beyond the life of those that inspired them. Another wonderful write my friend. Wishing you a splendid day

        • Tony Grannell

          Hello, Soren,

          Your lovely response is very much appreciated, inspiring an greatly valued. A little bit slow myself.

          You too have a splendid day, my friend,

          Tony

          • sorenbarrett

            My pleasure Tony you have a great day as well

          • Thomas W Case

            Thereโ€™s a lovely ballad quality here, with the worn boots, chestnut mares, smithing, poetry, and whiskey tears building a portrait of a man whose strength in every other part of life couldnโ€™t overcome his shyness in love. The recurring โ€œthough he a long time deadโ€ gives the poem its ache, but that final image of Rosaleen approaching him tenderly in his dreams is the keeper for me, because it grants these two lonely souls one last moment of closeness that life never quite allowed them.

            • Tony Grannell

              Hello, Thomas,

              I can't thank you enough for your most splendid response. It heartens me, truly, the old bard that, I am.

              Wishing you much happinness,

              Tony.

            • Kevin Hulme

              A Poem of What might have been for the Farmer. 'Faint Heart never Won' etc.
              A definite fave.

              • Tony Grannell

                Hello. Kevin,

                What might have been indeed. The curse of shyness found many a lonely heart. I'm always delighted when you drop by, thank you ever so much.

                Fond regards,

                Tony.

                • Kevin Hulme

                  No problem. Thank you.

                • Teddy.15

                  A lovely Yarn this Tuesday evening, a believe I have just met a farmer and his beloved. Your language and imagery as ever is truly exquisite ๐ŸŒน

                  • Tony Grannell

                    Hello, Teddy,

                    They would have been a lovely couple, alas, shyness interfered. You dropping by always delights me; as of now and always, I am most grateful.

                    Fond regards,

                    Tony.

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    Oh, Tony, this one got me! What a sad life to contemplate. I couldn't help thinking about how many people have gone to their graves carrying regrets they never found the courage to confront. Wonderful storytelling, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

                    • Tony Grannell

                      Hello, Tristan,

                      It is awfully sad, happiness denied because of shyness. Your words are very much appreciated, my friend.

                      God bless,

                      Tony.



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