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Minds of the younger


Notice of absence from Minds of the younger
Hello everyone, I will be unable to post anything as my younger cousin broke my computer.

I thought it was her
Her hair
Her voice
Her face
I love it
I loved it

But i thought it was done 
No more breaking
No bad blood
No more of her

But it’s not her anymore 
The subject just changes
The love just switches
To someone more unreachable 

  • Author: Creator of Mystery (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 17th, 2026 00:31
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  • sorenbarrett

    It is the vagueness of this write that makes it. Neither subject articulated or specified the noun remains only a shadow while the verb and adjective continue to act. A mystery to unravel that has no solution. Nicely done.

  • Paul Bell

    The younger cousin was my homework excuse for years.
    Some might be gone, but not in mind.

    • Minds of the younger

      sorry im a little bit confused, can you elaborate?

      • Paul Bell

        Oops, I was that busy with your broken computer I forgot about the poem and my homework excuses.
        Coming out of a relationship and then aiming higher than maybe you should.
        On the other hand, why shouldn't you aim high.

        • Minds of the younger

          ohh, ok thanks



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