The Gifted Theft

Salvia.S

Unknown crime of yours

Is that you robbed my heart, but—

It's already yours

- Salvia.S

© Salvia.S

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  • Paul Bell

    Well you gave in quick, must be a stayer.

    • Salvia.S

      I think some thefts don't need time. Thank you so much for the read and feedback!!! ❤️

    • sorenbarrett

      This clever write poeses the question of how one can steal something that they already possess and belongs to them a paradox. But then love is a paradox itself. A short but nicely written piece with poetic flair one might say even flare.

      • Salvia.S

        Thank you very much for your read and valuable feedback!!! Very much appreciated ❤️❤️❤️

        • sorenbarrett

          Most welcome Salvia

        • Tony Grannell

          Hello, Salvia,

          As is yours mine, perhaps, it takes a thief to know one. A poetic conundrum as is love. This is intriguingly and masterfully composed. Very well done indeed.

          Wishing you much happiness,

          Tony.

          • Salvia.S

            Thank you very much for the read and valuable comment!!! Very much appreciated ❤️❤️❤️

          • orchidee

            I thought this was gonna be about a poet robbing another poet's words! lol.

            • Salvia.S

              Lol 🤣 that's a wonderful thought!!! Thank you so much for the read and feedback!!!

              • orchidee

                It won't be wonderful thoughts from poets robbed, to the poet who robbed them - but unspeakable words of fury and rage for pinching their work! lol.
                A poet on another site pinched some words and actually posted his own picture with the poem. They commented: *(&^%^%£(!!**:%, and similar things. Ooh!

              • Fränz Müller

                Wonderful Haiku!

                • Salvia.S

                  Thank you so much ❤️

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Somehow I don’t believe you want anything returned, Salvia...LOL! Thank you for the smile today, dearest friend...and if someone has stolen your heart, I am happy for you! They just better take good care of it or they might find themselves in a gothic horror poem! 🤣❤️ 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

                  • Salvia.S

                    Lol! they will be in trouble 🤣 Thank you so much dearest Tittu for the read, feedback and the fave!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️



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