Jewel white spears of light
pierce through the shadowed leaves–as
black wings cross the sun
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Author:
Kaz (
Offline) - Published: October 18th, 2026 03:30
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This haiku presents colored beauty in a most natural image of color and motion. It grows more striking the more it is read. Very nice Kaz
Thank you so much ❤️
You are very welcome
Ah, the sun, where did it go.
Autumn leaves are falling.
I can picture this in my mind’s eye…fabulous!
Thank you lots 💓
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