The girl he didn't want to be with
Gave birth to a dead baby
Setting him free.
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Author:
Paul Bell (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Haiku
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Now Paul even for me that is dark. It makes total sense and probably has happened millions of times but it kind of takes the shine off romance and puts the thought on what the real purpose of love is and that of propagation of the species, romance nothing more than a ploy and sex itself the false advertising that leads to product maintenance under a legal contract. Well done old boy.
Yes, no love in this relationship, maybe lust in the beginning.
Money and sex a prostitutional cocktail
Hello, Paul,
A raw piece this. Unsettlingly brilliant.
Fond regards,
Tony.
Raws the word.
Happens a lot I would imagine.
Setting Who free: The Man or Baby?
One is free to be the dog he is, the other is released.
I've known a few of these Dogs.
Bloody hell, Paul! I had to read that twice. There's a particular kind of cruelty that doesn't even require someone to say anything aloud. The thought that people can be so callous genuinely sickens me. 🖤🌹🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Yes, it sure sticks in your craw that a dead baby can set you free.
Hopefully karma is round the corner for this guy.
Gritty.
Well, with me it made me stay, but that's another story. Compassion is sometimes a chain.
Interesting poem
Not with this shallow guy, he was heading for the hills.
Sure karma will catch up with him.
This is sad...
Setting free someone of responsibility.. This is a mind intriguing write...
I think that's exactly how he saw it.
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