A good title
Bright recital
Climbs vital
Mile by mile
A bad title
Bland survival
Stacks denial
File by file
A good title
Lifts the soul
Fills the hole
Makes broken whole
A bad title
Drags the feet
Drops the beat
Turns gold to sleet
Up the hill
Thrill by thrill
Ink can spill
Yet bend to will
Down the stair
Bare despair
Cold as air
Nowhere there
A good title
Plants a seed
Feeds a need
Grows the reed
A bad title
Chokes the root
Mutes the flute
Swallows fruit
Up to stars
Past the scars
Through the bars
Healing wars
Down through doubt
Inside out
Twist and shout
Dim the route
A good title
Rings a bell
Casts a spell
Draws you well
A bad title
Slams a gate
Tempts your fate
Arrives too late
So name it light
Or name it blight
Wrong or right
Day or night
The good titles fly
The bad titles fall
Yet both leave marks
Upon the wall
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Anthony Hanible (
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I would have to agree Anthony a title can make or break a poem, story or film. Nicely written my friend
Excellent work.
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