and just like that
the movie ended
and you went straight home.
i let go of your hand as you walked away and realized it wasnt as sore as mine.
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Author:
kay c (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 22nd, 2026 00:01
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Comments2
The question become was it sore from the tightness of the grasp or from the irritation of it. A thought provoking poem that could go either way but seems to logically be intended to mean the author felt the loss more. Nicely done
nice write
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