Where waters dream

Kaz

Nature surrounds me, within me, 

Once a darkened sea,

Now a stream of endless dreams,

 In awe, nature enchants me.

  • Author: Kaz (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 23rd, 2026 02:04
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • soheil khodaparasti

    A beautiful and contemplative poem. I love how you portray nature as both an outer presence and an inner experience, transforming darkness into a flowing stream of dreams.

    • Kaz

      Thank you so much ❤️

      • soheil khodaparasti

        You are very welcome.

      • sorenbarrett

        This write pretty much encapsulates how I feel. Nicely done Kaz

        • Kaz

          Thank you so much ❤️

          • sorenbarrett

            You are most welcome Kaz

          • Fränz Müller

            Living water, we are. As Bruce Lee said, be like water!

            • Kaz

              Thank you 😊 ❤️

            • Salvia.S

              Beautifully written!

              • Kaz

                Thank you lots ❤️

              • NafisaSB

                Nature is indeed enchanting- if one has the capacity to see 👌

                • Kaz

                  Thank you 😊 ❤️

                  • NafisaSB

                    you are welcome

                  • NafisaSB



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