~•*○Me To You○*•~ 8 syllables Thai Form

Gelyn

~•○☆○•~

I'm emotionally attached

Then I decided to detach

You made me feel that I am whole,

Now longing for you like a fool.

 

 

by Gelyn GeeGold Guinto AKA Golden Angel Rhapsodist

 

Oct 12, 2016

 

©  (Gelyn GeeGold Guinto)

aka Golden Angel Rhapsodist

All Rights Reserved

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    As in much good poetry and writing as a whole there is an opposition here. The detachment paired with the desire for attachment. The paradox of the wholeness and the search for completion. Nicely worded.

    • Gelyn

      Thank you so much for such a thoughtful and insightful interpretation of my writing. I truly appreciate how you captured the contrast between detachment and the longing for connection, as well as the paradox of wholeness and the search for completion. It means a lot to know that my words resonated with you on such a deeper level. Thank you for taking the time to read and appreciate my work. 🖋️

      • sorenbarrett

        My pleasure Gelyn



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