Notice of absence from Minds of the younger
Hello everyone, I will be unable to post anything as my younger cousin broke my computer.
Hello everyone, I will be unable to post anything as my younger cousin broke my computer.
her pretty little face
she annoys me
how dare she be so unreachable
yet still so vunerrable
oh let her live
sweet sweet hatred
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Author:
Creator of Mystery (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 24th, 2026 00:22
- Comment from author about the poem: just a quick practice poem
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There is cold envy and jealousy dripping from this poem. A sense of resentment and buried anger even hatred here. Painted so well in so few words.
thank you 😀
You are most welcome
Can’t say I never felt jealous of anyone, I have and I’m sure others had that feeling as well. Even a simple and short poem tells a great message, nicely done :))
Thanks! i cant say how many times i see others say that jealousy is a horrid feeling, and it makes me feel a sort of inhumane.
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