Heart of the Soul

Salvia.S

The heart's soul is love

Love's soul is you, may you know,

I am love's twinflame

- Salvia.S

© Salvia.S

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  • orchidee

    Good write S.

    • Salvia.S

      Thank you very much ❤️❤️❤️❤️

    • sorenbarrett

      This is a complex, layered and well composed senryu my friend. What more logical that the heart's soul to be love. The next line is endearing and stacks the object of love within love itself as its heart. the last line completes the relationship with you being the twin in such a lovely image of a flame which love can so easily be pictured as. Loved it Salvia

      • Salvia.S

        Thank you very much for your read, fave and most valuable feedback!!! I'm glad you loved it... Very much appreciated ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

        • sorenbarrett

          My pleasure Salvia keep up the good work

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Beautifully tender, Salvia! There's something so lovely about finding ways to express affection with such simplicity. Thank you for sharing this little gem! I hope you keep finding that kind of joy in your writing, my friend! 💗🌸✨🙏

          • Salvia.S

            Thank you so much dearest Tittu for the read, fave and feedback!!! Very much appreciated ❤️❤️❤️❤️

          • cellinic

            Wonderful and so sincere, my dear!!!

            • Salvia.S

              Thank you so much dear ❤️❤️❤️❤️ very much appreciated ❤️❤️❤️

            • Novaselic

              This is such a pretty poem✨

              • Salvia.S

                Thank you most kindly ❤️❤️❤️❤️

              • Mutley Ravishes

                I guess there's no other way but to go through the fire to find out about Love. Can I love unconditionally? No freakin' way! Maybe some far off day, when "I'm" out of the way?!

              • Tony Grannell

                Hello, Salvia,

                And may the twain never part in this poetically beautiful declaration of amour. Excellent and then some.

                Fond regards,

                Tony.

                • Salvia.S

                  Thank you very much for your read and valuable feedback!!! Much appreciated ❤️❤️❤️



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