"For You"
cease turning my green to grey
with wilful acts of nature
your heart is found in theirs
providing for this urgency
to lose love's indifference,
redeem that part of self
that feels only for you
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crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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It is in paradox that this one speaks to me in metaphor as well and here there are too many closed doors for my meager mind to proceed and it surrenders after a few attempts. There is meaning in green to grey. The paradox of willful in line with nature is most interesting. Personification has long been present in the area of mother. Two hearts in one paired with another paradoxical statement "love's indifference". Lastly the redemption of self interest is an interesting way of stating taking care of self needs first. This one feels greater than my meager mind can comprehend
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