Done With You

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Our vows said it all

In sickness and in health

When the bad happened

You became stealth

 

You did not even try

To pretend that you cared

When I tried to explain

You just sat there and starred

 

The one always full of advise

Suddenly becomes mute

But yet you claim to be the one

Who's always so astute

 

Decisions you made

Will all come to be

But they'll no longer include

You and me

 

 

(c) 10-5-2026

10-31-2026/RjH

  • Author: Raymond Hansell (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 31st, 2026 14:03
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    Hard and hurtful. A relationship misjudged as many are. What was promised becomes a mere memory. Well done



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