When thoughts arrive

marissa

 

i am forsaken of these lies

i am spent in disguise

i am discordant,never cruel

i am seen as a fool

 

tower in reversed,haunting my life

it truly feels like i am tamed 

because in the sky,i made a wish

i wished for strength

yet i am maimed

 

battles,bottles

what have i become

unaware of life

where is the sun?

should i need you?

i will not dare

when my thoughts poured,did you ever care

 

i am one-i am only

i am soulfully holy

with hope once again

i will find a friend within

  • Author: marissa (Pseudonym) (Online Online)
  • Published: November 11th, 2026 07:12
  • Comment from author about the poem: Feeling blue isn’t permanent!
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 6
  • Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett
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  • Dog days

    Hey nice poem. Hope you find new and interesting people!

    • marissa

      Thank you,truly!

    • sorenbarrett

      This has many subtle clues to mood and history. It speaks in images and carries with it sadness but hope and I loved the mix. It talks to me and is a fave



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