i wanted to see the sun
but it was obscured by the moon.
i wanted to gaze at the moon,
but my gaze was obscured by clouds.
i wanted to see my world,
but was obscured by all around.
© 2026 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
First published on tristanrobertlange.com, November 13, 2026.
Tittu
-
Author:
Tristan Robert Lange (
Offline) - Published: November 13th, 2026 04:06
- Comment from author about the poem: Part of The Thinking Dark collection.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 3
- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)
- In collections: The Thinking Dark.
Offline)
Comments2
Looking for the distant one misses the wonder of what is more near and the rarity of such connections. Why must we always look beyond what is to what is not. Avarice leads us to always want more and what we have is never enough one must look beyond. A short but powerful write my friend
I love the message of how we look beyond and not what is around us, a fav
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.