i dreamnt of us last night
and all i have felt was right
in the world the two of us built
i woke up with something but guilt
were lost in the air;we need to escape
were now here under we have to be awake
its a leap of faith we just have to take
cause up above we will be together in no fake
dreaming soothes my agony
but down there i always came to be
a hopeless man who still holds a key
of memories that contain you locked in me
as i go under and under again
the more i want to change the way back then
or else i'll be an old man filled with regret
waiting to die alone with such a deep breath.
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Author:
ejielyn ramos (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 14th, 2010 10:23
- Comment from author about the poem: i've done this while i was constructing another poem for my boyfriend but i was so stunned by this movie "inception" i cant concentrate on making one so i started to take down thoughts that are actually bursting from my mind. its a quartet semi surreal poem people might think a problem with the sequence of stanza but that's how i like it instead it gives me more meaning of it.
- Category: Surrealist
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Comments2
this is great.
Beyond description
oh not really! but thanks
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