you said you would keep me safe ,
protect me from the monsters in my closest ,
and bad guys on the street.
Now im laying naked on the floor ,
theres a whole through my chest ,
and your standing over me ,
covered in sweat ,
and blood ,
my blood ,
You walk away ,
feeling powerful ,
and proud of what you have done ,
well i lay here helpless ,
and in pain ,
taking my very last breath ,
i fall into deaths eyes ,
where i will forever stay..
Comments5
this is probably the most tearful poem i've read. it's good. but very sad.
Thanks 🙂
Wow! Nice poem, is about a rap?
yuup , and murder
Very good, but sad, poem. Its great:)
Kelsay, you are kinda sexy, and nice poem.
wwhhyyy thaanks you kelsey!
Wow... short but a very powerful poem. Well done!!
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