Deaths eyes

you said you would keep me safe ,

 protect me from the monsters in my closest , 

and bad guys on the street.

Now im laying naked on the floor , 

theres a whole through my chest , 

and your standing over me ,

covered in sweat , 

and blood , 

my blood ,

You walk away ,

feeling powerful , 

and proud of what you have done ,

well i lay here helpless , 

and in pain ,

taking my very last breath , 

i fall into deaths eyes , 

where i will forever stay..



  • nair36

    this is probably the most tearful poem i've read. it's good. but very sad.

  • Kri2arch

    Wow! Nice poem, is about a rap?

    • kelseyroy

      yuup , and murder

    • lostlily

      Very good, but sad, poem. Its great:)

    • Kelsey

      Kelsay, you are kinda sexy, and nice poem.

      • kelseyroy

        wwhhyyy thaanks you kelsey!

      • Paul Price

        Wow... short but a very powerful poem. Well done!!

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