When it knocks
Who dares ignore
Such a mighty force?
With demanding powers
That no soul would ever
Turn it's back against?
Life looses meaning
If love's to fade
Wose' gonna cherish
Life in this world
when love is no more?
No, not even one!
Comments2
Your poem is simple, but has a very strong message.
I agree with Erifarina. Strong, deep poem. Keep it up
thanks pal.
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