sarange Ondieki


When it knocks

Who dares ignore

Such a mighty force?

With demanding powers

That no soul would ever

Turn it's back against?



Life looses meaning

If love's to fade

Wose' gonna cherish

Life in this world

when love is no more?

No, not even one!


  • erinfarina

    Your poem is simple, but has a very strong message.

  • nair36

    I agree with Erifarina. Strong, deep poem. Keep it up :)

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