simone19

Gaze

 Piercing blue eyes stare meaningfully into hers, she can't breathe, her stomuch leaps, her eyes glisten, her knees go weak, she tries to speak but no words come out her heart races her body lay still, passion burst lips touch  

Comments2

  • Kri2arch

    Its beautiful

    • simone19

      Thankyou

    • erinfarina

      I like the first line 'piercing blue eyes..' - wonderful description of the girl. :)



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