[3*]Only once the drugs are done
That I feel like dying, I feel like dying
The world is my chair
And my chair is on fire
Burning into ashes
Soon it will expire
Only thinking of the beauty
No dread nor dire
Beauty down in flames
But I’ll attempt to go higher
Get high, so high to where there is no denying
Don’t try to prove me wrong I am suck on this thought because
I feel like dying
[2*]Only once the drugs are done
That I feel like dying, I feel like dying
Drifting on a cloud around a bottle of Vodka Sky
Falling down into a sea of the tears that I cry
At the lowest of the lows but still I sink
The only way to get back up is to gradually drink
Stop, stop, I feel like relying, then I feel like crying, then I feel like dying
[2*]Only once the drugs are done
That I feel like dying, I feel like dying
The sky is designed and the stars are aligned
No gravity here and no laws are defined
I just jumped off a cliff without a bunji
And sugar is sweet
Chocolate is rich
Candy is hard
But life is a bitch
Wish I could tell you everything, believe me I’m trying
But since I cannot do so, I feel like dying
[2*]Only once the drugs are done
That I feel like dying, I feel like dying
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Author:
Rob (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 17th, 2010 22:40
- Comment from author about the poem: I think Lil Wayne can make good songs but when I heard him sing, "I Feel Like Dying" I always wanted to write my own verion. It's not exactly happy but it's what I always wanted to do.
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
I've never heard the song you mention, but yours is sad....initially the last stanza made me begin to laugh, but it is sad....this earthly existence is sorrowful. because of the sin and death which came when our first father sinned. The scene you painted was wild and interesting....was it expressing what it is like to be high on that stuff?
Yes. When I was high anything was possible but I always felt like dying in the end.
Wow. It's an unknown world to me....thanks for giving me a peek into it by this poem.
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