someone someone alone


                New boy in new school,

                I saw him from a distance,

                Not very talkative,

                Had a nice personality,

                Nobody talked him,

                They left him alone,

                Even though he didn’t want to be,

                I watched him all day long,

                And for the next couple of days,

                He ate lunch in the stairs,

                He didn’t have any friends,

                He wasn’t a bright student,

                Loneliness swallowed him one day,

                Seeing him crying,

                Compelled me to go to him,

                Putting my hand on his shoulder,

                I helped him calm down,

                But after a few minutes,

                He left.

                Making me realize,

                I wasn’t any different from the others.



  • Author: karen (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 1st, 2012 07:24
  • Comment from author about the poem: It's actually reflecting someone I know. Someone who had a very well difficulty adapting to a new place.
  • Category: Sad
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  • BrokenWordsPoet

    Very sad poem, would like to work on it as a fusion poem; it has lots of promise if rewritten; I would like to do so if you don't mind. And then we could kick it back and forth and when finished you can post it as fusion. BWP... James... I like the realization in this work; because the realization is what makes this poem work.

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