Love is like a gentle breeze
that cascades through your entire being,
filling every fiber with emotion so deep
your heart grows wings
Love is a gift for the soul.
It is only when we can love,
that we can feel life's secrets
in a journey to discover ourselves.
True love sets no demands,
and sets no limits or preconditions
Lust and passion obscures love
and only hurt those who give in
Let love evolve and overwhelm
as we sit in our solitary prayer
for all of those whom we've loved
and those who have loved before
Inspired by Kristalee Berry's poem 'Night Story'
Written at 9:15AM 27 April 2012
Malaysia Time
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Author:
Huzaidi Hashim (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem was inspired by a poem written by Kristalee Berry who wrote the first verses: Love is like a gentle breeze that cascades through your entire being, filling every fiber with emotion so deep your heart grows wings Swung by the emotion, I thus continued with my own composition
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I feel that our own passions can make us feel atuned with love as long as we let it be love.. I Loved this poem!!!
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