At a distance everything seems so clear
At a distance everything looks so near
At a distance everything looks untouched
At a distance I still miss you so much
At a distance people look so content
At a distance How well we hide the pain
At a distance no one will ever know
At a distance real feelings never show
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Author:
Soki (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Everything looks perfect, at a distance, soki
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Very profound Soki I love your poetry
And I love yours
Beautiful poetry.
Thank you. I appreciate your comments very, very much.
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I like this poem very much; then it gives me that feeling I would like to rewrite and make it my own; I love all the thoughts in this poem and just in awe of that last line. I would like to correspond with you on this work; I see it expanding between the line; just as the line between the couple in the picture. BWP... James...
T hank you BWP four your comment. You already know how much I like the idea. Please keep me posted. Thanks again, soki
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