It flickers with a smile
And kindles with a touch
It spreads like wildfire
This wanting you so much
It sleeps with me at night
While trembling with desire
The want of you gets stronger
When the sun above gets higher
It fuels the beating of my heart
My body shakes with wonder
This wanting you tears me apart
Can't live like this much longer
It fills my eyes with tears
My heart with heavy sorrow
And yet this wanting is the Light
That Guides all my Tomorrows
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this is very beautiful, the rhyme and rhythm are terrific and the imagery left me smiling. good job
Thank you so very, very much for your beautiful words about my poem.
I'm glad you liked it and think I did a goos job.
what a beautifully sensual poem! very well written and filled with so much longing and emotion. truly enjoyed this one.
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. I am very glad you enjoyed it.
WOW!!Soki the power of love our emotions of love can be overwelming just like pain.
Yes colin, I agree with you. With love you reach the heights, with pain
you reach the profound depths.Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem.
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