BrokenWordsPoet

The Tear

In a room

full of roses

and a tear;

all you see

are roses

you cannot

 find

 the tear.

 

                                             © James W. McRight Jr. 2001

Comments3

  • baj-a

    wow! this is one of those awe inspiring poems that leaves the reader breathless.

    • BrokenWordsPoet

      This is one of my old writes; I pulled it out and dusted it off. I wish you well this morning. BWP... James...

    • duneman

      such a deeply sensitive and powerful poem. I have to agree with baj-a and add my own wow!

      • BrokenWordsPoet

        Thank you very much and I hope you're doing well. BWP... James... One cannot find a finer than Bonnie; I know that I have not. I have enjoyed her writing for years.

      • sokibgb

        I am also giving you my wow. Beautiful!



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