At a distance everything seems so clear
Like looking at the sky seeing only blue
At a distance everything looks so near
Like lyrics of our song playing in daydreams
At a distance everything looks untouched
Like no ripples on a looking glass pond
At a distance I still miss you so much
Like the voice of your heart stopped beating
At a distance people look so content
Like singing and reciting eloquent poetry
At a distance how well we hide the pain
Like curtains that blocked out our light
At a distance no one will ever know
Like what we put on was just for the crowd
At a distance real feelings never show
Like together and forever we put up this wall
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Author:
Soki (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 9th, 2013 09:38
- Comment from author about the poem: I publish the original poem several days ago. My friend BrokenWordsPoet liked it so much, he added his own lines following each of mine, so here is our fusioned version. Hope you like it as much as we did.
- Category: Love
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Comments5
wow! what a great fusion poem! beautifully and artistically done.
Thank you so much from BWP and I. We bothenjoyed it very much and we are glad you liked it.
Soki... Sorry but I didn't even know what a fusion poem is; now that I do I cannot tell you how much I enjoyed working with your beautiful lines. And I hope we have a chance to do it again sometime.
BWP... James...
BWP, Don't feel bad, the first time I was invited to participate in one I did not know what it was either. I enjoyed our poem very much and I'm happy you picked one of mine to do it with, regardless or whether or not you knew what they are. We will do it again anytime you want. For me it will be an honor, soki
Beautifull Soki this poem though I do have to say I love the original more Sorry
Thanks colin for reading and comenting on my poem. I really appreciate you reading and leaving your opinion, soki
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