Such a sweet smiling surrender

Capturing, placing me under a spell

A caress so faint and tender

Stories that the nights could tell

In darkness, I can truly dream

Free with my wants and desires

Morning laughs and shows to early it seems

Breaking my moment with open fire


Daylight brings me to my reality

I shall not let slip her name

Softness that eyes can see

A kiss from her, like an open flame

My soul, I am willing to give

If she makes such a quest

Only for asking, my life I can live

Night, come hurriedly, let me dream and rest



  • baj-a

    such a gentle poem that somehow leaves the reader feeling both sad and yet satisfied that there will be a happy ending. lovely write.

    • bigwolf

      Thank you baj-a

    • sokibgb

      Lucky is the girl you dream about in such a gentle, sweet way, soki

      • bigwolf

        Thank you sokibgb, dreaming gives my mind something to do while my body takes it's rest

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