The dark clouds pushed their way
Across the evening sky
Letting go it's justified force
While sending raindrops down
Some landing on forgotten structures
That lay dormant in the past
Forms long covered by time
As waters raced from an old tin roof
Falling into the soft soil below
Playing like an unrehearsed symphony
Seding up thankful sighs
As the earth feels nature's caress
Now, the night brings on a change
Watching as the moon yawned
Pausing for just a little while
Then slipped into the darkness
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bigwolf (
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- Category: Nature
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such a soft and beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Well penned.
Thank you diamond, I look forward to reading your poems
bigwolf, your love for nature is so intense that it makes the reader
believe he's right there. Even now I can still smell the rain. Beautiful, soki
Thank you so much, I am a nature lover.
you write some of the most beautiful nature poems I have ever read. your love for nature comes through in every line. I especially like the image of the moon yawning.
Thank you baj-a, I enjoy writing a bout nature. I do somewhat consider myself a landscape artist. The artist has the canvas, I have the blank page. The artist has the paint, I have the words.
Well ....... the nature is inspiring..........
Thank you, I do love nature. In all of it's natural state, it will always be truthful.
Yes......we all are its part...
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