Sometimes I think about you
How young and free we were
It all seems like a dream
A dream I can't forget
Memories come rushing in
Of times, people and places
We both thought we'd won the game
For we held all the aces
Then everything changed, somehow
No one's really to blame
We played and lost then paid the price
With tears, grief and pain
Sometimes I think about you
The way we used to be
For greater love I've never known
When we both played to win
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Author:
Soki (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 20th, 2013 09:33
- Comment from author about the poem: Love is sometimes lost but never forgotten. Good day, soki
- Category: Love
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Comments5
Beautiful!!! What more can I say to a beautiful poem like this....very well written.
Thank you so much diamond, for your beautiful comment. You made my day.
Great write sokibgb, keep making those memories
Thank you bigwolf. You make me feel the sunshine and smell the rain,
and maybe I'll be able to share a few memories of mine with you.
You are a sweet person, I will look forward to all of what the future holds.
Is impossible forget a real love.
Love that was beautiful once, will never be forgotten. Thank you for reading and commenting.
you captured the pain of lost love so perfectly and the sadness of wondering what if...
Lost love will forever live in our memories and so will the question what if.......
Beautifull Soki though very sad the love we all have lost in life though memmories stay strong
Yes colin, lost love is gone but not forgotten
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