Look inside,
See what you see,
Deep black hole,
Inside the galaxy,
That is me,
No heart,
Soul,
Love,
Hate,
Feelings,
Emotions
Not hot,
Cold,
Dead,
Alive,
Just endless emptyness,
As far as the eye's can see.
Colin Bradley.
- Author: colin ( Offline)
- Published: March 23rd, 2013 05:25
- Category: Sad
- Views: 22
Comments3
when that eye popped up it was a bit scary...and the poem is also intriguing and chilling... there should be more than emptiness in anyone as we all have feelings of some sort. enjoyed the read.
Thankyou Baj-a I love your comment glad you enjoyed
The picture matched the poem so well that it was a pair made together. I loved both the pic and the poem. good job.
Thankyou Diamond for reading & commenting
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