I saw you there in the crowd
Yet we were all alone
Your hair flowed with the breeze
You were just a few steps from me
I smelled the sweetness of your perfume
It began to intoxicate me
You saw me and offered a smile
Your painted lips, like bright roses
Making my heart race with anticipation
As you came closer,I heard you whisper
I looked into your soulful eyes
And you walked pass me
And hugged someone else
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you made the moment come so alive I felt as if I were actually witnessing the scene. not the ending I was expecting though :-).
Life may not always imitate art.
very artistically written. You painted a very sad picture though. I was right there with you.
Thank you diamond, it helps to have someone to share with.
Lovely poem bigwolf, but sad endings make me cry.
Thank you soki.
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