I saw you there in the crowd

Yet we were all alone

Your hair flowed with the breeze

You were just a few steps from me

I smelled the sweetness of your perfume

It began to intoxicate me

You saw me and offered a smile

Your painted lips, like bright roses

Making my heart race with anticipation

As you came closer,I heard you whisper

I looked into your soulful eyes

And you walked pass me

And hugged someone else

  • Author: bigwolf (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 25th, 2013 14:38
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 20
  • User favorite of this poem: sokibgb.


  • baj-a

    you made the moment come so alive I felt as if I were actually witnessing the scene. not the ending I was expecting though :-).

  • bigwolf

    Life may not always imitate art.

  • diamonddagger

    very artistically written. You painted a very sad picture though. I was right there with you.

  • bigwolf

    Thank you diamond, it helps to have someone to share with.

  • sokibgb

    Lovely poem bigwolf, but sad endings make me cry.

    • bigwolf

      Thank you soki.

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